Is my gut right?
or, is my mind right?
or is it my heart, that’s right?
You’d think two would be at war.
Well you’re wrong.
My whole being is at war,
just for you…
If you know the answer,
please do share
because my body is in turmoil,
all because I care.
Poetry 101 Rehab
The prompt: Right.
5 responses to “Am I wrong”
wow.. this is excellent.. 🙂 so far the best take on the prompt i read.. so deep as well.. really nice..
Thank you so much 🙂 and it is personal, saw the prompt & had to join in.
🙂
Oh this is beautiful! Such a powerful poem – and so relatable. I think most people are torn inside between competing impulses. And you put it very well, in strong and clear and beautiful words.
Thank you Mara 🙂