50 Word Story

Walking down the road, all alone, embracing the warmth of the setting sun, she kept kicking the stone. She knew there was no such thing as luck when she heard thunder crackle in the distance. Speeding up her stroll, she surveyed the surroundings, and soon enough she was home.

It’s not that interesting of a story but I feel proud lol I did it 🙂 I saw PH’s Story and decided to try the March 50 Word Story Challenge.

I’m still extremely busy at work but when my brain gets tired I take a WordPress-break 😀


6 responses to “50 Word Story”

  1. I think it is very good as well! I like the image of the girl kicking a stone down the road with a storm approaching. I get the feeling she lost at something at school that day, but then she makes it home before it rained. It may be to your benefit, if a brain wave hits you, to re-write and clarify why she new there was no such thing as luck, but all and all I think it is a good attempt. These are incredibly difficult to write and actually an exercise in re-writing.

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