You and I
Me and you
When we’re together
there’s no feeling blue.
I love a challenge,
a hard mountain to climb,
you make it hard to whine.
Smiles and your laughter
make it so worth the while.
You know this too,
I do love you…
But can you tame this rebel?
And then I breathed and it came to me lool 🙂 Poetry 101 Rehab: Couple.
Even your heart can have two sides to the story…right?
6 responses to “Tame Me”
Perfect! That’s a great complement to your other poem, this one is more organised and more assured – and, of course, more hopeful!
It is! lol thank you 🙂
Love the wild heart! I really relate to this poem and I agree with Mara, it’s an awesome complementary piece, like the first poem was “here’s the situation” and then this poem is the “what are you going to do about it?”
Yes lol I’m glad you like it 🙂
I like this one even better than “Why Not” – the emotions are entwined even stronger and seem even more reachable.
Yet it too sounds a little like a swwet daydream within some of your lines 🙂
I do really like it.
Thanks 🙂