Sugar Coated
You make her so weak
I’ve not heard silence so sweet
This loud girl gone meek.
Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge: Loud Silence.
The life of a Jamaican girl.
You make her so weak
I’ve not heard silence so sweet
This loud girl gone meek.
Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge: Loud Silence.
I like where you were going with this. I have a friend who has completely molded herself into what she thinks her boyfriend wants her to be. She was outspoken, strong-willed, and a bit opinionated but now she simply nods. Sad. 🙁
That is terribly sad 🙁 I couldn’t live like that.
I am so pleading the fifth on this one in regards of the various interpretations that are running rampant.
I like the confusion haha because the poem itself is a bit back and forth, the weakness, yet she stays with him, because being with him is so sweet, but to be with him she’s putting back a part of her personality, the loudness.
I was looking at it as weak with love and not needing to speak. 🙂 Kind of a speechless thing.
Sah I get you, while I mean actually silenced. Lol this is why I love poetry there’s a lot of ways to interpret it.