Red Yiy

Gold laden necks craned
Good as gold heart acclaimed
Eyes red with envy.

Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge: Crane & Gold.

“Gold laden necks craned, good as gold heart acclaimed.”
“Good as gold heart acclaimed, eyes red with envy.”

“Red yiy” is Patois for “Red eye” which used to describe an envious person.


10 responses to “Red Yiy”

  1. Very interesting this one. Took a moment or two to get it. I like it when that happens. I knew there was something to it and then I got that first line, finally and I was like HA. Awesome.

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