Writing 201: Journey

A bus precariously packed with percussion, and drummers trying not to nod

A four hour drive to Negril, together we trod

With Drummy drumming on the back of my seat

I stare out the window, imagining something to eat

Through twists & turns, my gut stays strong, let this journey end soon, dear God.

Day 2, Journey.

Prompt: Journey
Form: Limerick
Device: Alliteration

I can’t wait for Saturday 🙂

(Featured image taken by Nicholi Stevens.)

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2 thoughts on “Writing 201: Journey”

  • This was amusing! The second line of the limerick should be roughly the same length as the first. The form should be: longrhyme1, longrhyme1, shortrhyme2, shortrhyme2, long rhyme1. If the three short rhymes were intentional, then excellent!

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