Sugar Coated

You make her so weak
I’ve not heard silence so sweet
This loud girl gone meek.

Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge: Loud Silence.

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7 thoughts on “Sugar Coated

  1. I like where you were going with this. I have a friend who has completely molded herself into what she thinks her boyfriend wants her to be. She was outspoken, strong-willed, and a bit opinionated but now she simply nods. Sad. 😦

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    1. I like the confusion haha because the poem itself is a bit back and forth, the weakness, yet she stays with him, because being with him is so sweet, but to be with him she’s putting back a part of her personality, the loudness.

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